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Sunday, April 11, 2010

Fall of Light - Intro/Outline

This is my world so far, I have yet to name it.
In true epic fantasy style my world is set in a medieval style time period, but not too traditionally.
Fall of Light is set nine years after the Borderwars. So, I will give you a quick history.

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In the north is Eillienia, Angalia and Osakeio.
Eillienia is the main kingdom of Fall of light. It is based on the more traditional English/European medieval period.
West of Eillienia is Angalia. Influenced by Scandinavian and Norse history the Angalians are something like migrated Vikings.
East of Eillienia, over the Avalon Sea is the Island nation of Osakeio, an empire inspired by a combination of Japanese and Samurai history.
In the south is Rajangaria, and the sub country of Issan. Rajangaria is hot, dry and relatively hostile. The people are mostly nomadic clans, ruled by an individual chieftain. The countries, people and cultures of Rajangaria and Issan are influenced generally by various Middle Eastern countries and cultures.

So... For year before the Borderwars there had been fighting between Eillienia and Rajangaria but with no unification between the clans the threat of the Rajan warriors was never considered a threat to the Eillienian soldiers who patrolled the Rhone Mountains.
Then came Dharakon Khan.
Naming himself Warlord, Dharakon united the Rajan clans under his rule, leading the masses of warriors over the Bhadakhar Ranges to descend on the people of Eillienia without warning.
For almost nine years the Borderwars brought death and destruction to the northern kingdoms. It was only after the sudden disappearance of Rajan Warlord that the fighting finally came to an end.

Fighting side by side in the war had bonded the three northern kingdoms and together kings of the north vowed never to make the same mistake again, creating the Northern Alliance.
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So the first chapter is a prologue, this post is the first half or so of the prologue in a rough outline.

Set in late winter in the time of the Borderwars is is told from the point of view of Dean, a seven year old boy who is the son of a farm owner in the village of Bolt in Eillienia.
The light is fading as Dean hurries home. Dean is worried, His father is going to be so mad with him for being late. To dean a beating seems the worst thing that could happen to him in his child s mind.
Breaking into a run he reaches the crest of the hill that leads down to the Farmstead. Dean slips on the icy ground, tumbling down the hillside and into the bramble bushes before landing face down in the ditch.
It is then that dean looks up and sees the orange glow. From the spot where he lay in the ditch he can see The yard in front of his home, illuminated by the flames of his burning home. Before him are six dark figures on horseback, their silhouettes forming a circle around the huddled forms of his Father, Mother and sister as they kneel on the cold ground.
In on fluid motion on of the riders slides from his saddle and approaches Deans family. Dean can not hear the words that are spoken. Whatever the black man said seemed to have angered deans father, he lunges protectively to move himself in front of his family.
In one frightening second the shadow man steps forward, gripping a handful of Deans fathers hand in his fist he yanks his head back. Without hesitation a knife appears in his hand, and he sweeps it over his throat. His father Falls to the ground, the screams of his mother and sister drowned out by the explosion of the fires as the beams in the burning roof give way. Dean clamped his eyes shut.
After a moment he opened his eyes again when he hears a scream, with wide eyes he looks on as the riders throw his mother and sister, roughly over the front of their saddles. With a single whistle they all remount and disappear into the darkness beyond the flames at a gallop.

Dean stays in his place in the ditch all night. Gradually the flames of the buildings die down, and by the time the first grey light of dawn arrives they are little left but smoldering embers.
Crawling out of the bramble dean slowly walks over to the still shape of his fathers body on the ground. Blinking the tears back he walks over to the remains of the barn. Poking at the smoking ashes with a stick he finds the head of his fathers shovel still intact, the handle having burnt away. He pulls it out to cool for a moment, then walks over to the trampled remains of his mothers vegetable gardens and begins to dig.

After some time of Dean hacking at the half frozen earth with the spade tip he is startled by the sounds of horses approaching. The horses are close, there is no point in running so Dean returns to his task, lift, strike, sweep, lift, strike, sweep.
The horsemen arrive by the second strike. Dean does not look up but he can not help but listen.
The man at the head of the riders curses loadly, leaping from his saddle, he stides over to Deans fathers body.
After a few breathes Dean wipes his eyes and resumes his digging. In the background he can dimly hear the men talking, then the voices go quite. Deans eyes begin to water again as he hears the footsteps approach him, stopping a few feet from where he worked. Dean blinked and continued with the motions, refusing to look up at the stranger who watched him.
The sound of steel on stone behind him made dean jump and he whipped his head around. Of all the things Dean had expected to see the reality was none of them. Dean stared bewildered for a moment, at the opposite end on the grave the man had knelt, his once fine clothes now caked in mud. Deans confusion however was that the man had began to dig using the blade of the finest looking sword dean had ever seen.
After the grave is completed the stranger helps Dean to place is body in the ground and fill it in in silence........






Fear and Procrastination...

Finding time to write is a problem for me at the best of times. And with my husband away and the kids running around like hypo midgets I find myself using that excuse more and more often. I don't even think that this is the real problem anymore! I have gotten to the point where I need to move forward from where I am in my novel and quite frankly it scares me.


So I have decided to start posting my outline etc. I have started to make myself paranoid with all the talk of clichés and would like some feedback on the story. I never realized how difficult it would be to make epic fantasy 'different'! So while I know some people won't like it I am going to try to stop second guessing myself and go with what i think fits. The time will come to start worrying about what everyone else thinks later. 


Stay tuned.... Fall of Light will be emerging soon! 





Friday, April 2, 2010

Terry Pratchett - The Last Continent!
This would have to be my favorite Discworld novel! Probably because I am Australian, but it is just so well done.

When the librarian of the Unseen University in Ankh-Morpork gets sick the wizards discover that they are unable to use their magic on the sick orangutan without his real name!
There is one who might know the true name of the library ape, Rincewind! This poses a problem as Rincewind, who is now known as 'Strewth', is now living in a dirt hole in the outback of the last continent of the Discworld. A continent 'girt by sea' and thousands of years in the past.

The wizards travel to the continent known as EcksEcksEcksEcks, and set out to find Rincewind.

Mean while, Rincewind is befriended by Scrappy, the talking Kangaroo. Scrappy tells Rincewind that it is his destiny to restore the past and bring back the rains to the bone dry land!
Being no stranger to 'destiny' and all it brings, Rincewind does what he believes to be the right thing. He runs!

His freedom is short lived however as he is soon captured by a short tempered dwarf named Mad. After narrowly escaping an attack by some out back thugs in supercharged emu carts, Mad takes him to Dijabringabeeralong. An out back town made up of one road, a Pub and run by a crocodile named Dongo!

The night is passed with drinking, gambling and sword bearing giants spouting the phrase 'You call that a knife? This Is a knife!' In the morning Rincewind not only has a sore head but also is reunited with Scrappy, his kangaroo stalker whom only he can see. And then when he leaves Dijabringabeeralong on his way to the city of Bugerup he is set upon by Drop Bears!

The wizards seem to forget about finding Rincewind, instead enjoying the food, drink and cigarettes that seem to appear whenever wished for, while coming to terms with the idea of being in the past and trying to figure out how to get back to Anhk-Morpork.
In their travels they come across God, hard at work molding, assembling and drawing the creatures that he creates. in true Unseen University fashion the manage to baffle and befriend god. The hard working God in the outback has a heavy workload, largely due to the fact that he is oblivious of sex and the ability for animals to reproduce, which the wizards rectify! After accidentally inventing surfing while escaping a storm and creating the platypus with their poor artwork, they head to Bugerup and meet up with Rincewind.

Rincewind is framed by tin helmet wearing bush rangers and after escaping the gallows, meets a sly, meet pie selling Kangaroo named Dibbler! (The kangaroo 'cousin' of Cut Me Own Throat Dibbler of Anhk-Morpork). It end with the wizards reuniting and making their dramatic way home!


Thursday, April 1, 2010

Facts and Fantasy? The Importance Of Research!

Why is research so important?

All writers are at the mercy of their readers. No matter what you write, in the end your success or failure as an author is determined by those who read your book! No easy feat in the world of fantasy writing. Lovers of fantasy can be obsessively passionate! They are the most dedicated and loyal fans, they are also some of the toughest critics on earth! So getting the details right is just as important as your storyline or characters.

So where do you draw the line between fantasy and reality? What can be made up and what needs to be accurate? Why does it matter?

It's all about keeping your writing believable, understandable and realistic.

It is not very believable for your characters to travel 200 miles in a day, or to be picking apples in the dead of winter! The army of a broke government in a drought affected land is not likely to be feasting and drinking each night!

I will most likely come back to this topic at some point... At the moment everything that I wanted to say has escaped me, as per usual. But if anyone has any thoughts I would like to hear what you think. Hopefully my brain blank disappears sometime soon! :)

Friday, March 26, 2010

OCD - A Symptom of Fantasy Writing!


I know I get a little involved sometimes when I start researching for my writing... and I get a bit obsessed about the details and organisation of every little detail that I have gathered up. The hours that I have spent on the maps and time lines, world-building and historical research is extraordinary! So the question has yet to be answered... Does every Epic Fantasy writer start out like this? Does it get easier? Or has Fantasy infected me with a touch of OCD?

I have calmed my anxieties to a degree by creating a Wikia page to catalogue my research and information, with the added bonus easy navigation.
Now I just have to sort through two years of library books and web surfing scibbled on a mountain of scrap paper, exercise books and note pads! I am extremely motivated however as once I have completed the work my efforts will be available not only to myself, but also to any other writers who chance upon it.

It really isn't hard to see why one may become slightly obsessive compulsive when you think about how much essential detail is needed in an epic saga. An entire world doesn't just create itself. You have to build your kingdoms from the ground up, inventing governments, societies, cultures, religions, histories, laws of magic, Technologies! And then there is the geography, terrain, climate and seasons, commerce and trades, imports, exports ...and so on and so on.... And that's just world building!

Then there is the characters. As I mentioned yesterday the greatest fantasy authors are the ones who are able to bring their characters to life. I would say most fantasy readers out there would have that one special character, or maybe even more. That character that you felt was real, who made you laugh or cry, love or hate. For me it was Jimmy the Hand*, That may have been slightly influenced by the fact that I was 15 at the time that I first read the Riftwar novels.

The point I am trying to make is that while your imagination creates the story and the perfect characters there is still all the extras that are needed to give the final touches to each scene.... What are the terms for the buildings? Whats the name of that tree? How far does that horse have to go? How long will it take? How fast can it go? When to you harvest wheat?

There are those who would question why all that stuff matters... It's fantasy, can't you just make it up? No... and I will explain why ... Tomorrow! :)


Looking for fantasy fans!

Hello, Hello :)

My name is Erin, I am 24 from Western Australia and I love fantasy and have been writing my first epic fantasy novel, part-time, for almost two years :) ... As a mother of a 3 year old and a 1 year old writing can be slow going at times :)

I have decided to try a blog as my experience with most writing sites and forums has been a bit blah! I'm not sure why but there seemed to be a lot of people out there claiming to be fantasy lovers, but complaining about every aspect of the genre!

*Rant Alert*
I'm not sure when it became taboo to write epic fantasy with magic? or an epic journey to win the war and save the world? I don't know why but all of the sudden everyone has this fear of 'Fantasy cliches'!
These people need to forget about 'cliches' and think about what makes fantasy great!
Tolkien, Lewis, Fiest, Pratchett, Eddings... these writers have become legends of the fantasy genre! The works of these authors are full of battles between good and evil, wise wizards, mighty armies and wilful princesses, yet have been consistently popular for many years!
This is because it takes more than just an original and out there idea to write a great story! Great fantasy is all in the details! It's the complexities within the structure that makes us fall in love with a series, the characters and there world!
*end rant*

So, If there is anybody out there who is interested in writing, or fantasy or just wants to meet new people, I'd be happy to hear from you :)

Ciao for now!
Atkogirl!